I talk about what failure means to me. Not failure in a public perception but true failure. The lack of giving your all and failing is the biggest disrespect.
You're smart and have things to say, but you don't know how to write.
There's much lost here because you don't know how to write.
Don't sweat it- most people cannot.
But if it's important to you to express to others what you're thinking- in the clearest and most interesting way possible- you should learn how to write.
You should learn how to give advice and not just criticize. True advice would have been to say something along the lines of what you said and then offer up resources that help him reach that goal- maybe through in an actual tip on what exactly he did the was so poorly worded and then how he could have written it more effectively. Here's an article that might help you in giving and receiving advice. https://hbr.org/2015/01/the-art-of-giving-and-receiving-advice
You're smart and have things to say, but you don't know how to write.
There's much lost here because you don't know how to write.
Don't sweat it- most people cannot.
But if it's important to you to express to others what you're thinking- in the clearest and most interesting way possible- you should learn how to write.
You should learn how to give advice and not just criticize. True advice would have been to say something along the lines of what you said and then offer up resources that help him reach that goal- maybe through in an actual tip on what exactly he did the was so poorly worded and then how he could have written it more effectively. Here's an article that might help you in giving and receiving advice. https://hbr.org/2015/01/the-art-of-giving-and-receiving-advice